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Action-verb prompts, the universal bullet formula, before/after rewrites, and anti-patterns to avoid. Copy a template, swap in your specifics, paste back into the editor. No AI involved — the wording stays yours.

The universal bullet formula

Every strong resume bullet follows this shape. If a bullet is missing one of the four parts, it's weaker than it could be.

[Action Verb] + [Specific Task] + [How / Tool] + [Impact / Result]

Worked example:

Designed a modular 3-driver Bluetooth speaker in SOLIDWORKS, iterating enclosure geometry across 4 prints to hit 80 dB at 3 ft.
  • Action Verb: "Designed" (past tense, specific)
  • Specific Task: "a modular 3-driver Bluetooth speaker"
  • How: "in SOLIDWORKS, iterating enclosure geometry across 4 prints"
  • Impact: "to hit 80 dB at 3 ft"

Action verbs by category

Pick a verb that matches the actual work. Vary them across your resume — repeating "Led" or "Built" on every bullet reads lazy.

Building / engineering

DesignedEngineeredBuiltPrototypedFabricatedShippedDeployedImplementedArchitected (avoid — AI-tell)ConfiguredAssembledProgrammedRefactoredOptimizedDebuggedDiagnosedIntegratedAutomated

Analysis / research

AnalyzedResearchedModeledQuantifiedMeasuredEvaluatedSurveyedForecastedTestedValidatedBenchmarkedAuditedInvestigatedCharacterizedIdentifiedCalculated

Leadership / coordination

LedCoordinatedDirectedManagedMentoredTrainedCoachedSupervisedOrganizedFacilitatedHostedOnboardedDelegatedAlignedDroveOwned

Business / impact

GrewNegotiatedLaunchedClosedPitchedSoldSourcedSecuredEarnedGeneratedReducedSavedCutImprovedIncreasedDecreased

Creative / production

ProducedDirectedArt-directedWroteEditedPublishedComposedFilmedPhotographedIllustratedDesigned (visual)StoryboardedCuratedBranded

Service / operations

ServedResolvedTriagedHandledProcessedFulfilledMaintainedInspectedOperatedInstalledRepairedCalibratedInventoriedStocked

Avoid these AI-tell verbs

Recruiters are getting better at spotting AI-generated resumes. These verbs are the most common giveaways — use the plainer alternatives instead.

AvoidTry instead
ArchitectedDesigned / Built / Split
SpearheadedLed / Started / Drove
OrchestratedCoordinated / Ran
PioneeredStarted / Built first / Created
StreamlinedSped up / Cut steps / Simplified
EmpoweredHelped / Taught / Trained
CuratedPicked / Chose / Selected
ElevatedImproved / Raised
TransformedRebuilt / Replaced
RevolutionizedRewrote / Changed
LeveragedUsed
UtilizedUsed
Delivered (filler)Shipped / Sent / Completed

Before → After rewrites

Before
Responsible for managing inventory and helping with customer service in a fast-paced retail environment.
After
Tracked 800-SKU storeroom in Lightspeed, cut weekly stockouts from 12 to 2 by adding reorder-point alerts.
Replaces 'responsible for' with concrete verbs. Names the tool. Quantifies the improvement.
Before
Worked on a research project at the lab to analyze data and contribute findings.
After
Analyzed 4,200 patient-trial samples in R; co-authored finding on dose-response curve published at SfN 2024.
Replaces 'worked on' with specific verb. Names the scale, tool, and the venue/output.
Before
Led a team that did marketing for a small business and increased their sales.
After
Led 3-person team running paid + organic social for a 12-location bakery, growing online orders 28% over 4 months.
Specifies team size, channels, business type, and a measurable result with a time window.
Before
Helped customers with a wide range of issues and provided excellent service.
After
Resolved 60+ daily customer tickets across billing, shipping, and returns; maintained 4.8/5 CSAT over the quarter.
Quantifies daily volume and categories. Replaces 'excellent service' with a measurable rating.

Common anti-patterns

  • "Responsible for…" — replaces what you DID with what you were supposed to do. Always rewrite as an action verb.
  • "Helped with…" — undersells your contribution. Specify what you actually built / ran / fixed.
  • "Various" / "a wide range of" — lazy phrasing. Name the actual things.
  • "Excellent", "robust", "innovative" — empty adjectives. Replace with the metric or specific that earned the adjective.
  • Trailing "…" — never end a bullet with an ellipsis. Either say it fully or cut it.
  • Two-paragraph bullets — keep each bullet under 22 words. If you need more, split into two bullets.
  • Repeated opening verbs — "Led" three bullets in a row reads canned. Vary them.

Quick reference: lengths & limits

  • Bullet length: 15-22 words (one rendered line in Redense's LaTeX template).
  • Per-item bullets: 2-4 bullets. More than 4 reads padded; fewer than 2 reads abandoned.
  • Section heading: use the recognized names (Experience, Projects, Education, Skills, Awards, Leadership). Custom names confuse ATS parsers.
  • Project tags: 2-5 comma-separated tools ("React, TypeScript, GraphQL"), not full sentences.
  • Date format: "May 2024 -- Present" or just "2024". Avoid "Junior year" or "Last summer" — they don't parse.

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